Sunday, November 29, 2009

Theseus and the Minotaur Alternative Ending - Naomi 7N

The Minotaur bellowed in his ear and flung him through the darkness. Before the minotaur could stamp on him, Theseus shouted "STOP!! Minotaur. listen closely my friend. i shall not harm you if you will not harm me. You are more than just a big monster you have a heart. There is a great person inside of you, let it free. you are brave, strong and intelligent so why hurt people. i shall free you if you promise to hurt no one again and so people shall not harm you. Now follow me my friend.'
Theseus waited in silence for a few moments until the minotaur started to bellow. 'You are right my friend. i am not a monster.'
'Yes you are not so can you please get me out so i can free you?'
'Sure my friend' the minotaur bellowed as they walked out. when people saw the minotaur they screamed but Theseus stopped them from running. 'Stop!! he is not going to hurt you. he wants to be free. He explained to me that if you dont hurt him he wont hurt you. so help me get this poor animal to safety.'
The villagers started to believe him so they took the minotaur, even though they were scared, to his rightful home.
'Ariadne. will you come to live with me in Athens?' He said as the villagers came back feeling free.
'Oh yes Theseus!' She said as she got on the boat with Theseus to go to Athens.
He pulled up a white sail feeling proud of himself. The ship stopped at an island to get beverages.
'Ariadne. will you kindly go get some wine and bread for the trip?' Theseus said proudly.
'Oh anything for you my prince!' she shouted as she ran off board.
Theseus anchored the boat and got changed into some fresh clothes. Ariadne was back before he was even done! Soon after they set sail again.
After hours they finally arrived in Athens where king Aegeus greeted them. and soon they got married and were still remembered from that day on.

By Naomi

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